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Monday 29 July 2019

Akaroa

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I woke up,filled with tiredness. Suddenly it hit me I realised I was going to Akaroa. I then looked over to see my still sleeping friend Elizabeth,but she wasn't the one coming with me. 


I jumped out of bed with excitement and ran straight to the shower. Once I got dressed I ran to see if Elizabeth was awake but surprisingly she was still asleep so I jumped on the bed to wake her up. 

After we dropped Elizabeth home, my mum dropped me off at Molly's house and while she was talking to Kara (Mollys mum) I dropped my stuff on the ground and ran up to Molly's room. After about ten minutes my mum left then we all put all our stuff in the car snacks, blankets,  pillows etc. Oh and also we didn't forget Molly's dog because he was coming with us.


After about 30-50 minutes in the car we were at little river (it's not a river) We went there to get lollies and let Teddy (the dog) go to the toilet. When we got to the holiday home we got all of our stuff and put it in our room, we also made some Tik Toks and ate lollies.

When we finished Molly and I walked around the town and went to the rock shop and got ice cream. The second day we hung around did some gymnastics on the couch and took Teddy for a walk. After that we packed all our stuff up  and headed back home.

Have you ever been to Akaroa?
Have you been to the rock shop in Akaroa?







2 comments:

  1. nice post it was a nice story with good explanation and I havent been to Akaroa but it looks like fun next time you could try and use your own photo!

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  2. I like how you explained the whole trip in a shorter way.no i have not been to Akaroa sadly and i haven't been to the rock shop either.

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