WALT- write a scary story using story starters
I woke up from a strange dream,I got up from my bed,walked into the dining room and saw my my oldest sister lying on the couch with ants crawling all over her face and maggots eating her ear wax.I walked up to her deep growly voice,I hear her muttering saying ¨who's that in my house?¨ I wander off to my room and look under my bed for my red hoodie.I then see a dead body under my bed and i scream as loud as i possibly could in horror. Blood was EVERYWHERE!Then I feel something strange happening,My feet are turning green with purple spikes,¨I'm turning into a monster¨.
What would you do if you were in this situation?
How would you handle it?
Wednesday 12 June 2019
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WOW that was very interesting i loved how you added in the punctuation
ReplyDeletei like your story i think you could add some couler question what was your dream about
ReplyDeletei like how you used alot of punctuation
ReplyDeletemaybe try adding some colour next time 💙